Sometimes I felt some authors don't known the full stop just the joining comma. So their fics tend to be an endless sum of actions with neither pertinence, coherence or consistency.
I was reading this fantastic fic that suddenly turn into a crappy soap opera. As if the author didn’t want to end the fic so started just adding "action" at random.
I was reading this fantastic fic that suddenly turn into a crappy soap opera. As if the author didn’t want to end the fic so started just adding "action" at random.
Of course my dreams of an uniterruped reading was asking to much. Not because of my kids but for my boss and his evil kickside who asked me to go to the office on Saturday morning, meaning I was at Santiago at 18 hrs not 10 in the morning at first planned.
Still, there are lot of passages I TRULLY enjoy.
Will go spoiler hunting and making comments on your journals.
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For more HP cartoons http://cagle.com/news/HarryPotter07/
Still, there are lot of passages I TRULLY enjoy.
Will go spoiler hunting and making comments on your journals.
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For more HP cartoons http://cagle.com/news/HarryPotter07/
Abusing my flist
Apr. 20th, 2006 12:05 amToday Shiv and I discuss the "redemption" fantasy in fandom. You know: Good girl redeems bad guy with her tender love, is very likely that bad guy will emotionally abuse good girl.Don't you think?
Shiv joked about Neville/Bellatrix, as simil of Snape/Hermione; and she mentioned how Bella would destroy Neville (eat him was her wording. Does eaing has any sexual conotation in English, in Chile is very explicit).
And that is how started, I'm craving for a Neville/Bellatrix vignette. *insert puppy eyes look*; would someone of you ladies be nice enough with me?
Please?
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I posted a challenge at WIKTT, the topic is abuse. Of course after I posted it I realized LOTS of grammar mistakes. Grrr.
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PS: my "I'm crap" mood, was just that: a mood. Common sense has arrive once more.
Shiv joked about Neville/Bellatrix, as simil of Snape/Hermione; and she mentioned how Bella would destroy Neville (eat him was her wording. Does eaing has any sexual conotation in English, in Chile is very explicit).
And that is how started, I'm craving for a Neville/Bellatrix vignette. *insert puppy eyes look*; would someone of you ladies be nice enough with me?
Please?
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I posted a challenge at WIKTT, the topic is abuse. Of course after I posted it I realized LOTS of grammar mistakes. Grrr.
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PS: my "I'm crap" mood, was just that: a mood. Common sense has arrive once more.
Spaming my Flist
Dec. 5th, 2005 02:35 pmTaken from http://www.vh1.com/movies/movie/239761/news/articles/1513756/story.jhtml
May be I'm late with this, I'm no Rita:
(Dan Ratcliff answering here)
Do you hate Alan Rickman's character Severus Snape as much as I do now after reading Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince?Wow!
You just don't know. If you'd read the first book, and somebody had told you what was going to happen in the fourth, you would never have believed them. But by the time you get to the fourth, there is an utterly logical and satisfactory explanation for everything that happens. If anyone's gonna come up with Snake being a double double double double spy and make it believable, it will be J.K. Rowling.
You've speculated that Harry might not get out of the whole thing alive. I don't know if that was before you read the sixth book. Now I don't see how he can handle Voldemort on his own.
Really? I think there has got to have been something between Snape and Harry's mum in it. I don't know that for sure. But I mean, based on what you sort of seeing in the fifth book, I think there was something more to their relationship. I certainly think you're right, and I'm not sure Harry could take him on alone, unless there's a very big event that really hardens Harry and strengthens him halfway through the seventh. I don't think he's a powerful enough wizard. Maybe that will be Snape's redeeming quality!
May be I'm late with this, I'm no Rita:
(Dan Ratcliff answering here)
Do you hate Alan Rickman's character Severus Snape as much as I do now after reading Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince?Wow!
You just don't know. If you'd read the first book, and somebody had told you what was going to happen in the fourth, you would never have believed them. But by the time you get to the fourth, there is an utterly logical and satisfactory explanation for everything that happens. If anyone's gonna come up with Snake being a double double double double spy and make it believable, it will be J.K. Rowling.
You've speculated that Harry might not get out of the whole thing alive. I don't know if that was before you read the sixth book. Now I don't see how he can handle Voldemort on his own.
Really? I think there has got to have been something between Snape and Harry's mum in it. I don't know that for sure. But I mean, based on what you sort of seeing in the fifth book, I think there was something more to their relationship. I certainly think you're right, and I'm not sure Harry could take him on alone, unless there's a very big event that really hardens Harry and strengthens him halfway through the seventh. I don't think he's a powerful enough wizard. Maybe that will be Snape's redeeming quality!
Spaming my flist
Oct. 23rd, 2005 11:59 pmAre you aware that a quick search at google of the words "insufferable" and "know-it-all" and "hermione" throw 2.140 links?
It's time for fanfic Snape to look for more original epitets to describe his soon to be fanon love.
PS: To be fair with our beloved potion master, if you add Snape to the search it reduce to ONLY 1.530 links.
It's time for fanfic Snape to look for more original epitets to describe his soon to be fanon love.
PS: To be fair with our beloved potion master, if you add Snape to the search it reduce to ONLY 1.530 links.
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Oct. 23rd, 2005 12:20 pmHave you ever read a very very bad fic, what ever your standars are, but oddly enough can't stop reading it?
I'm catch with this horrible plot full of cliches. Not only a Granger; with a rape Hermione that continue rising her child and send it to Hogwarts and the boy start realizing who his father is. Is terrible writen too. I had read some amezing stories with similar pattern, but this is BAD.
Also I read Mundungus "The Trail of the Black Star ", well writen, but totally offensive to my people. Not a single honest or smart latin. All were corrupt, not efficient, robbers, etc. Is that the way first world see us?
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Cyberdummie question:
Is it safe to download a song by MP3?
How do you do it?
I want to download Luchin by Victor Jara, but The sites make me be afraid of giving my datas.
I'm catch with this horrible plot full of cliches. Not only a Granger; with a rape Hermione that continue rising her child and send it to Hogwarts and the boy start realizing who his father is. Is terrible writen too. I had read some amezing stories with similar pattern, but this is BAD.
Also I read Mundungus "The Trail of the Black Star ", well writen, but totally offensive to my people. Not a single honest or smart latin. All were corrupt, not efficient, robbers, etc. Is that the way first world see us?
...
Cyberdummie question:
Is it safe to download a song by MP3?
How do you do it?
I want to download Luchin by Victor Jara, but The sites make me be afraid of giving my datas.
What will happen to my zone? The next four years really trouble me.
On a happy note, for this sad day, Heart with no companion has been updated.
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=7438&i=1
On a happy note, for this sad day, Heart with no companion has been updated.
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=7438&i=1
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Oct. 24th, 2004 10:00 pmGuess who has fever now, and need to end a report for work? Right!
I'm so glad that in two more hours this week will end.
Well, being honest, Sunday wasn't bad. Mum came with all her sushi stuff, and "El Negro" (hubby) cook us the best sushi ever.
Even my non - prepared 6 hour class was quite good. While driving to the U, I desing a workshop and I felt that student don't realized that the class wasnt prepared.
I had a little incident at the last five minutes, I had in that class three Army men and one marxist guy, they always debate, and I let them.
We have been working in the concept of school violence. (I support the thesis that school it self is a very violent institution, from grading to arquitectonichal space). Well, everything was all right until the militars say they don't have violence at the militar institution, what is in fact a joke (the guy was serious). Other student responce them, and then it was just a thing of seconds before everybody was fighting (NOT DEBATING about Pinochet times, and the Army rol in it).
I really felt that things were out of my control. I used the coward path, and tell them that as Rugby had three moments, two of playing, and one of camaradery arround a beer, this class was haeding to the third "rugby" moment and that I kindly invite them to continue the dicussion at the cafeteria, good afternoon, and thank you very much. Ufff.
It had been 31 years since this start, and 15 since we return to democracy. It is still raw.
Mum was with my aunty yesterday, and told her that "Little Nocturnus had a fantastic writer workshop at the net" (Meaning 30minutefics), so aunty decided she want to join. That don't please me, not at the least.
This is my private space preciousssss.
Than I remember Kalinalea membership at the Austen fanon, and ask her for help. She kindly send some usefull links.
I've created another fanom adicted.
Now my infobox is full of mails expresing how fantastic this thing is. She had spend all day at the net.
One of my reticense was that my respectable aunt will get really schock with some adult containt.
I recieved, a very intelligent and liberal comment from her, about some books I'll never thought she would have read. It seems I need to give old ladies some credit. Wonders never end.
There were a earthquake at Japan, send hugs for people over here. It always tremble (at the least) here when Japan has an earthquake. Hope this time I'm wrong.
EDITED AFTER sCATTEREDLOGIC COMMENT:
We havent got an earthquake yet (cross fingers
tightly), but we always has after Japan, at least since I recall.
Chile is land of earthquakes, is as commons as USA tornados. The last one in Santigo was 1985, so is just to much time lapse. Trembling is a matter of every year.
I'm so glad that in two more hours this week will end.
Well, being honest, Sunday wasn't bad. Mum came with all her sushi stuff, and "El Negro" (hubby) cook us the best sushi ever.
Even my non - prepared 6 hour class was quite good. While driving to the U, I desing a workshop and I felt that student don't realized that the class wasnt prepared.
I had a little incident at the last five minutes, I had in that class three Army men and one marxist guy, they always debate, and I let them.
We have been working in the concept of school violence. (I support the thesis that school it self is a very violent institution, from grading to arquitectonichal space). Well, everything was all right until the militars say they don't have violence at the militar institution, what is in fact a joke (the guy was serious). Other student responce them, and then it was just a thing of seconds before everybody was fighting (NOT DEBATING about Pinochet times, and the Army rol in it).
I really felt that things were out of my control. I used the coward path, and tell them that as Rugby had three moments, two of playing, and one of camaradery arround a beer, this class was haeding to the third "rugby" moment and that I kindly invite them to continue the dicussion at the cafeteria, good afternoon, and thank you very much. Ufff.
It had been 31 years since this start, and 15 since we return to democracy. It is still raw.
Mum was with my aunty yesterday, and told her that "Little Nocturnus had a fantastic writer workshop at the net" (Meaning 30minutefics), so aunty decided she want to join. That don't please me, not at the least.
This is my private space preciousssss.
Than I remember Kalinalea membership at the Austen fanon, and ask her for help. She kindly send some usefull links.
I've created another fanom adicted.
Now my infobox is full of mails expresing how fantastic this thing is. She had spend all day at the net.
One of my reticense was that my respectable aunt will get really schock with some adult containt.
I recieved, a very intelligent and liberal comment from her, about some books I'll never thought she would have read. It seems I need to give old ladies some credit. Wonders never end.
There were a earthquake at Japan, send hugs for people over here. It always tremble (at the least) here when Japan has an earthquake. Hope this time I'm wrong.
EDITED AFTER sCATTEREDLOGIC COMMENT:
We havent got an earthquake yet (cross fingers
tightly), but we always has after Japan, at least since I recall.
Chile is land of earthquakes, is as commons as USA tornados. The last one in Santigo was 1985, so is just to much time lapse. Trembling is a matter of every year.
10 top things I hate of ... Nah, is all said and I just could add AMEN.
But please authors check on this: http://members.ozemail.com.au/%7Eimcfadyen/notthenet/fantasy.htm
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Is there anything more boring than Voldemort?. I hate the "Snape is summon" or "Hermione get caught" escenes. They are all the same, all boring. I'd never read a good study of Voldemort character.
I teach a few kids wich grandads were condemed at human rights trials. For all of them "Granpa" was a good old man, they were "family" men. I can't belive this Dark Lord who only know to cast cruciatus from left to right.
But please authors check on this: http://members.ozemail.com.au/%7Eimcfadyen/notthenet/fantasy.htm
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Is there anything more boring than Voldemort?. I hate the "Snape is summon" or "Hermione get caught" escenes. They are all the same, all boring. I'd never read a good study of Voldemort character.
I teach a few kids wich grandads were condemed at human rights trials. For all of them "Granpa" was a good old man, they were "family" men. I can't belive this Dark Lord who only know to cast cruciatus from left to right.
(no subject)
Sep. 29th, 2004 06:56 pmPlease, you need to read this ficlet. Any hint would be a spoiler.
http://www.livejournal.com/users/lizbee/234910.html#cutid1
http://www.livejournal.com/users/lizbee/234910.html#cutid1
Here it is again, the old concrit discussion. Someone called my ficlet a "pastiche", I don't know in english, but in spanish the word has a very offensive connotation. So I send a combative missive. Politeness don't make you less brave, that is my motto.
Well I will roast some marshmellows with the flames.
( My reply at wiktt )
To a pompous flame, a pompous and a half reply.
Well I will roast some marshmellows with the flames.
( My reply at wiktt )
To a pompous flame, a pompous and a half reply.