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Allow me a fic rec. The Seven Transgressions:
http://ashwinder.sycophanthex.com/viewstory.php?sid=6193&i=1

The style is incredible. Wish I could writte like that.

Date: 2004-08-20 10:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zoepaleologa.livejournal.com
It's not bad. Hugely derivative of Neil Gaiman's short story style, actually. And that idea of the "thinny" is lifted from Stephen King piecemeal.

I validated it on SH, and it's not bad. No masterpiece, and overly pretentious in my not very humble opinion. There are too many fic writers adopting an over high style and sacrificing elegance and clarity, for overblown metaphor.

But at least it is a bit different from run of the mill marriage challenges, and that can't hurt.

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