Shit

[nocturnus33]

Sometimes I felt some authors don't known the full stop just the joining comma. So their fics tend to be an endless sum of actions with neither pertinence, coherence or consistency.

I was reading this fantastic fic that suddenly turn into a crappy soap opera. As if the author didn’t want to end the fic so started just adding "action" at random.

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[nocturnus33]

I'm not very sure where I will lead. In fact right now I'm stuck in a chapter, I´m planning to re started it.