The writing's utterly abysmal too. Any one who writes "..." X stated - needs to go back to school. The only word you need is "said".
Mind, I've seen loads of supposedly good fics where Snape talks like nothing human, too. Most of this can be prevented by a simple read aloud before posting.
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Date: 2006-01-19 02:40 pm (UTC)Mind, I've seen loads of supposedly good fics where Snape talks like nothing human, too. Most of this can be prevented by a simple read aloud before posting.