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This is a question for authors and readers:

Is the plot the main ingredient of a good story?. If is so, what make a good plot?

Of course that would depend on the definition of plot. Of the three I give under the cut, I like the last one.

Plot )


Oct. 25th, 2004 07:24 pm
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I post this at 30minutefics.
KnightOfSword betaed it.
Hope you enjoy.

bluebells )
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I had a hellish time trying to put this right in LJ, at the end I never knew how I get it right, but it works.
Title: Remember body.
This was grammar beta by [ profile] knightofswords Thanks!
Author’s note: The poem is from Kavafis, I twist it sense. Sorry Master.

Remember body )


Oct. 14th, 2004 02:36 pm
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Ira send me my Halloween assignment a few days ago, one of the requirements is that it need to be funny. Oh. My. I could be terrible funny IN SPANISH and not in written way.
I'm glad, it force me to try something new. Today a plot bunny hit me in my head. I had to thanks my brain fog, I live the keys inside the car, and call Dear Hubby to rescue me (Sod off with woman liberation, it was sooo good just to relax and wait for my savior). Well, while waiting I sketched the main idea

Take it from melisande88, really easy since I come from another culture

A book you own that no one on your friends list does:

Chilean History? That is too easy, let me think in my actual favorite: Kavafis’ complete poetry.

A Music CD you own that no one on your friends list does:

This one is rare even in Chile: Baroque XVI century Music from the Chilote`s Jesuitism Missions in Mapudung, sang by peheunches kids. Gotcha!

A DVD/VHS tape you own that no one on your friends list does:

Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban?. Not sure if anybody has it. It’s at Chilean black market.
EDIT Pandora Nervosa told me she has the VHS too, so lets try again, I have "Ogu & Mampato in Rapa Nui (Easter Island)". Our ONLY cartoon movie.
A place you've been that no one on your friends list has been:

Chiloe & the Southern Road. Marvelous chilean south, where the witches are still real.
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I post “Naked” a companion piece of “Bright Moon” at [ profile] 30minutefics. Hope I get verbs a little better than usual (cross fingers). I’m studying English grammar, but lets face it: Is sooooo boring. Grammar is those kind of things you learn just for a sense of duty.

Please, if you pick a mistake just tell me, is the only way I could learn this stuff.

A vignette

Sep. 30th, 2004 10:52 am
nocturnus33: (leyendo)
In all these years of dealing with evil, there are some soft memories he treasures dearly.

So many shadows surround him: Betrayal, death, sometimes hunger, and the worst: that constant battle against the dark. He feels exhausted.

When the beast gains his soul, round silver moon menacing him, during the harsh moments of his transformation, another Moon comes to warm him. When stripped from his humanity, the memory of her big round eyes is the only thing that holds him.

Luna. His Luna.

She who had seen him. No prejudices. Just warm openness.

Tomorrow, he swore, tomorrow, he would go and talk to her.

He only hopes to have the nerve

(Nope, I haven't learn my verbs yet, but scatteredlogic kindly fix them.)I posted yesterday at 30minutefics. I want to explore this two.

Of coffee

Sep. 21st, 2004 09:49 pm
nocturnus33: (Caracola)
(Edited) I found this lovely Remus/Luna
Does anyone knows a good Remus fic? If Luna is there will be better.


Yesterday I re start my Fibromyalgia diet, wich includes no coffee. Maybe thats why I look at this meme with longing eyes. Any way I'm glad I'm in the "good path" again. BTW no chilean would ever accept what USA called cappucino, we served with real, oh delightfull so many callories, cream here.

You're a Cappucinno.
You're a Cappucinno!

What Kind of Coffee are You?
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Is not Wednesday here yet, but as it is in the rest of the world, and I'm anxious to know what you think, here it is. Was for [ profile] meganberrieh.

The Golden Apples )

Please review.
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I have lots more fun writting Severus than Hermione. Why?
I have a more complete picture of him than hers. It is more easy and fluid.
Maybe my inner man is more developed? Duno. I dont have a clear answer.

meme )


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